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Here are the poems:
16-repudiate
Guilt Trip for a Dilettante
by Julie Krantz
my mother always cautioned… “do your duties with aplomb—
comb your hair and brush your teeth, take a bath (at least once a week),
clean your room and travel light, wear an outlook clear and bright.”
“to repudiate your duti(ates),” she’d piously intone, was absolutely daft—
“your teeth will rot, your room will stink, your very skin will loose and shrink.
your hair (what’s left of it) will thin, your prospects will grow grey and dim.”
“but that’s not all, my Angel Cakes—your mother’s goodly heart will break.”
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8-eavesdropping
Swallows Return to the Barn at Eve
by Jane Yolen
Swarming homeward to the eaves
Like a bunch of fork-tailed leaves.
Hearing all the buzzing gossip
In the barnyard as we cross it.
Flying fast, we swallow hard,
All the insects in the yard.
Always listening, never stopping,
That’s what we call barn eavesdropping.