ROUND ONE: 2-bode vs. 15-indoctrinate

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Here are the poems:

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2-bode what does it mean?
SpringMan
by Damon Dean

Do wind chills, ice and snow bode ill for you?
Birds dare not sing, trills frozen in the air?
Do buttercups, cold, cower in your dirt,
afraid to rise because of deep despair?

My green cape flares! Bulbs, buds, and blooms appear.
I whisper! Bird songs thaw, their music spoken.
I breathe! My exhale melts your fears away.
I have arrived–and evil Winter? Broken!

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15-indoctrinate what does it mean?
Someday, Maybe
By Cynthia Cotten

This big old world could be so great
if, rather than indoctrinate,
we managed to accommodate
(or–better yet–appreciate) the differences we see.

To do so might alleviate
bad feelings that accumulate
and gradually turn to hate.
It’s worth a try–at any rate, that’s how it seems to me.

 


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  • deborahhwilliams

    I love both of these! Love Dean’s imagery of a thawing bird song, and Cynthia’s has the perfect rhythm of a song lyric.

  • Renee LaTulippe

    I like your Spring-y superhero, Damon! Cynthia, I really appreciate your gentle message and lovely rhythm. Brava.

  • http://www.debrashumaker.com/ Debra Shumaker

    Damon, after 12 snow days for the kids, I think SpringMan has finally arrived here in VA. So your poem is much appreciated! And Cynthia, I love, love, love the message of yours. Difficult choice again.

  • Samuel Kent

    Holiest of mackerels, guys! Truly well done, both of you!

  • Carol Samuelson-Woodson

    These two are both very well done. Spring as super-hero, yes!!!! Cynthia, I’m impressed with the way you used a difficult word–great poem.

  • Marcus Ewert

    Damon Dean- wait till you read my poem for this round! Our poems are such and salt-and-pepper shakers of each other, it’s as if we planned it! CRAZY!

    • Damon Dean

      I did! We both had springitis! Great poem, hope it will fare better than mine. Cynthia beat me out by miles with a tough word!

      • Marcus Ewert

        Ha! Well, apparently this was not the year for wins by personifications of Spring speaking in the first person! I too got trounced – in my case by Michelle’s charming and industrious goats!

  • http://phillipvanwagoner.com Phillip Van Wagoner

    Damon! My security guard would LOVE to meet with SpringMan! Great poem!

    Cynthia – this poem is SO true. So heartfelt. Thank you.

  • DeSales

    DeSales students voted for Cynthia! Good luck!

  • Damon Dean

    Congrats Cynthia! Loved your poem, as some have said with great rhythm and meaning. Well done!

  • Dave Crawley

    Hi Cynthia. I missed the early rounds. Didn’t know you were competing. Love the poem!