ROUND ONE: 2-combination vs. 15-malingerer

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Here are the poems:

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2-combination what does it mean?
Another Kind of Party!
By Patti Richards

My annoying little brothers are a gruesome combination
Making noises that would give your hair a curl.
When my mom said we would have them, I used my imagination
To try and make believe that they’d be girls.
I pictured pink and purple at such dainty destinations,
Like afternoons with queens and cakes and tea.
But now our only parties start with this same invitation,
“Hey! Come out on the porch and watch me pee!”

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15-malingerer what does it mean?
Smarty-Pants
by Carissa Mina

I cannot do my chores today
because I am not well.
I tried to rise up out of bed
but to the floor I fell.
So there will be no vacuuming
or cleaning of my room
for if I were to try
I would be facing certain doom.
I cannot walk the dog
or even shovel up his poo
and scrubbing all the dishes
would be more than I can do.
I’d really love to help, I swear!
I want to do my part.

Some call me a malingerer,
but I just call me smart.

 


Public Vote (2-combination vs. 15-malingerer)
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2-combination vs. 15-malingerer

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Classroom Vote (ID Required)
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  • Samuel Kent

    Pee vs Poo. The students are going to love y’all. Carissa, I admire your use of contextual definition and your meter is TIGHT.

  • http://www.mainelywrite.blogspot.com Donna Smith

    I noticed we had pee and poo to choose from too…nice!

  • Elizabeth Scarpelli

    great endings in both poems.

  • http://www.thinkkidthink.com/ Ed DeCaria

    And we end the night with another SURPRISE ending! I thought both of these were great. Congrats to Carissa for moving on to Round Two, and Patti thank you for delivering a fun, well-written story.

    • http://www.pgwrites.com Patti Bumpus Richards

      Thanks Ed! It was a nailbiter that’s for sure…Carissa pulled it out by one vote! Congratulations and good luck in round 2! For me? Maybe next year:)