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Here are the poems:
2-girth
Said The Captain To The Hippo
by Bruce Balan
I’ve scrutinized your résumé,
its pros and cons I now can weigh:
You have aquatic pedigree
and never joined a mutiny
You’ve diving skills, but there’s… your weight
and I can’t have a drowsy mate
My ship has no sufficient berth
for one of such substantial girth
vs.
15-inchoate
in-ko-it
by Jeanne Poland
inchoate deeds are tap roots
primum well springs
inspiration stems
innate KINGS
early QUEENS
elementary births of greatness
inchoate, explicit, initial beginnings-
inch worms in the soil