ROUND ONE: 2-girth vs. 15-inchoate

r1f2 2-girth vs. 15-inchoate

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Here are the poems:

2-girth
Said The Captain To The Hippo
by Bruce Balan

I’ve scrutinized your résumé,
its pros and cons I now can weigh:
You have aquatic pedigree
and never joined a mutiny
You’ve diving skills, but there’s… your weight
and I can’t have a drowsy mate

My ship has no sufficient berth
for one of such substantial girth

vs.

15-inchoate
in-ko-it
by Jeanne Poland

inchoate deeds are tap roots
primum well springs
inspiration stems

innate KINGS
early QUEENS
elementary births of greatness

inchoate, explicit, initial beginnings-
inch worms in the soil

 


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  • Catherine

    These are both outstanding! Jeanne I couldn’t write one like that if I tried and Bruce what a great duet of berth and girth.

  • Quinette Cook

    Bruce, love that you wrote about the sailing life (indirectly).
    Jeanne, I don’t know what I would have done with that word!

  • http://motherstreusel.com/ Mother Streusel

    Great job! Really loved reading these!!!

  • Damon Dean

    Jean, you breathed out each potentiality so well. Love the ‘inch worms in the soil.’
    Bruce, this carefully negotiated interview was delightful! Did this hippo apply as your first mate at some port of call?
    Enjoyed reading these too!

  • julie krantz

    Hard time choosing–poems were both great.