ROUND ONE: 3-cull vs. 14-pastiche

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Here are the poems:

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3-cull what does it mean?
Cole’s Culinary Capers
By RJ Clarken

Cole the Koala has wicked-cool skill.
In his kitchen, he’ll dish up Kale Kettle,
Kohlrabi with Cayenne, Camembert Dill…
…’cause a scullery-bear can’t just settle.
He’ll cull ‘cross the cosmos, seeking until
he discovers a new course. Such mettle!
Casseroles, curries, crêpes, custards or curd,
classic comestibles…Mmmmm…Yum’s the word.

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14-pastiche what does it mean?
Slumgullian Stew
By Elizabeth Scarpelli

First boil a lambs head until cooked just right
Add hot pepper to give it some bite
Combine pan-fried gizzard, spaghetti con slime
Blacken cannoli, lizard with thyme
A sprinkling of crickets, a dash of cayenne
Dinner will be served a half passed ten
But, after eating you say this pastiche is not right!
I guess the infirmary may be full tonight!

 


Public Vote (3-cull vs. 14-pastiche)
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3-cull vs. 14-pastiche

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3-cull vs. 14-pastiche
Classroom Vote (ID Required)
Final Results:
3-cull vs. 14-pastiche





Note: The poem for 14-pastiche was late by one hour, so the Public Vote starts at +10 in favor of 3-cull.

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  • Amelia Shearer

    You two are on the same wavelength with your profile pic poses and your poems about food! :-) Separated at birth? …

    • RJ Clarken

      Right? Totally weird. But fun. :D

  • http://www.debrashumaker.com/ Debra Shumaker

    Yes, too funny that they are both about food. They were fun!

    • RJ Clarken

      That was funny! And thanks!

  • http://www.mainelywrite.blogspot.com Donna Smith

    What are the chances both poems would be spiced with cayenne? And your photos? I can hear Twilight Zone music…

    • RJ Clarken

      Seriously. Cosmic Doppelgangerness, I guess. :D

  • Samuel Kent

    RJ: great alliterative choices. Elizabeth, the progression from under-appetizing to disgusting paints a vivid picture (urp).

    • RJ Clarken

      Thanks!

  • Carol Samuelson-Woodson

    Intriguing: two foodie poems! Hard to choose.

    • RJ Clarken

      Great minds, I guess…

      :D

  • http://phillipvanwagoner.com Phillip Van Wagoner

    You two are a formidable team! RJ makes me hungry, then Elizabeth comes in with the punch to the gut. Great poems!

    • RJ Clarken

      What a yummy comment! Thank you!

  • http://www.thinkkidthink.com/ Ed DeCaria

    Wowsers. Closest matchup yet! 3-vote spread among authletes and 2-vote spread among classrooms. Thank you, Elizabeth, for mixing up your Slumgullian Stew, and congrats RJ for making Round Two!

    • RJ Clarken

      Congratulations to Elizabeth – your poem was great! And thank you, Ed!

  • Elizabeth Scarpelli

    Congratulations RJ, we think alot alike! Good luck on round two. Liz

    • RJ Clarken

      Thank you, Liz. I really loved how we were so much alike – poses, foodie poems, cayenne…

      I think you’re a wonderful writer and poet. Best wishes!

  • Damon Dean

    I remember vacillating between these two. Great poems, and congrats RJ!