ROUND ONE: 5-milestone vs. 12-dispassionate

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5-milestone what does it mean?
Naps are for Losers
By Suz Blackaby

The starting gun sounded, the racers were off!
One quick as a bunny, one more like a sloth.
The hare passed a milestone and stopped for a snooze.
The tortoise kept going. “I don’t like to lose!”
What were her chances? Almost nonexistent,
but she stayed awake and her pace was insistent.
These are the facts of this fabled defeat:
The tortoise? She won. And the hare? He got beat.

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12-dispassionate what does it mean?
Every Hero Needs a Stylist
By E. Kristin Anderson

He’s a dispassionate assassin,
in downtown alleys, colors clashing,
my brother thinks he’s gonna dash in—
solve the crime, no sense of fashion.

Guys like Batman know to go all black
and psych out bad guys with a sneak attack.
Alas, crime prevails when heroes slack …
and I want my sequined slippers back!

 


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  • Samuel Kent

    Suz, I really appreciate that even with a 5-seed word, you don’t shy away from vocabulary that could probably come in at 11 or 12 seed.

    Ms. Anderson, I loved this couplet most of all:

    my brother thinks he’s gonna dash in—

    solve the crime, no sense of fashion.

    • http://ekristinanderson.com/ E. Kristin Anderson

      Thanks so much, Samuel!

  • http://www.mainelywrite.blogspot.com Donna Smith

    Close…a difficult choice to make – the flow or the rap.

  • Carol Samuelson-Woodson

    Hard to choose; considered long and hard. Both wonderful!

  • Carol Samuelson-Woodson

    Great take on old fable, Suz. “Dispassionate assassion”! Wonderful movie title. Love ‘em both.

    • http://ekristinanderson.com/ E. Kristin Anderson

      Someone should so make that movie, right?

  • http://deowriter.wordpress.com Jone MacCulloch

    Suz, the pacing made me fell like I was in the race. But I do love my naps.

  • Melanie Manzer Kyer

    Both great poems! But Suz, you won me over with your quick pace and it was a great twist that the tortoise was a girl, too! :) Nice work!